Project 4

Last week we had a class only on Monday. During the week, we prepared the project 4. Based on timed writing, we revised it and added more information. For me, individual conference was helpful. At first, it was hard to understand what I have to write about. Because the writing was not persuading writing, deciding thesis and organizing the writing was difficult. Even though the conference was helpful, I am not satisfied with my writing yet. The writing does not have consistent flow. I think I need more time to modify the writing.